Friends
Friends are people that are always there to kill the person who made you cry
They'll come and go through out the years
When you find them, you shouldn't let them go
They'll be there through the ups and the downs
Friends are people who treat you like a sister or brother
They'll always be there for you
No matter the date or time
There the people who will be your bridesmaids
The godmother or father to your child
and will be the people you're playing bingo with at the nurser home
Friends are always there through hard and awesome times
Never let a true friend go because sometimes
you'll find they fill your other half
Friends stay Friends forever
through fights and fun times
no matter the situation that tries to come between them
The Friendship will always stay internal
Friends are people that are always there to kill the person who made you cry
They'll come and go through out the years
When you find them, you shouldn't let them go
They'll be there through the ups and the downs
Friends are people who treat you like a sister or brother
They'll always be there for you
No matter the date or time
There the people who will be your bridesmaids
The godmother or father to your child
and will be the people you're playing bingo with at the nurser home
Friends are always there through hard and awesome times
Never let a true friend go because sometimes
you'll find they fill your other half
Friends stay Friends forever
through fights and fun times
no matter the situation that tries to come between them
The Friendship will always stay internal
First off I am going to say that I really like the poem :) But there are a couple things that I am going to critique you on...first you need to reread the whole poem because there are several typos that make the poem grammatically incorrect and second if you can you may want to take out some of the words in the poem because they don't add to the significance and just make the poem a little ramblely.
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